Clover Madison

I love Dahl's work especially Revolting Rhymes (If your ever in the Children's section of a bookstore you must check it out its hilarious). His short stories are amazing. I've ...

Ah, just wait until you finish Grapes of Wrath. I hated Steinbeck for a while then started reading Grapes of Wrath and thought 'okay he's not that bad.' Oh but ...

This is really good. Your detail is amazing. There are only a few things that bothered me - first just be careful with a character so young, don't make her ...

You may have already fixed these mistakes but here's what I found: At the end of the first paragraph you refer to JKR as Joanne Rowling to keep consistency only ...

Me and Ben had just gotten out of a long fight about his relationship with Lynzie. This should really be Ben and I. Sorry but this is a huge pet ...

Wow! I thought that was a very good start, very intense. You did a good job of drawing the reader in right away. I especially liked the rhyme at the ...

I really liked the style that you wrote this poem in. The interchanging short lines, long lines was very neat. I'm sure if I've seen that used before but I ...

Some Grammar Stuff First: They carried to paperwork from office to office. He had a large pile of papers in his hands. “ Ken, don’t be gone too long, this ...

Shakespeare writes about experiences, events and emotions people can still relate to. He is the absolute master of emotions with evil villains so enduring that you find yourself cheering for ...

This is a very good poem. I like your word choices in the first three or so lines especially. Hard, cold and hold all work really well together and their ...

I liked this story. I thought the ending was really cute. It made me smile. There were a few parts that stuck out though while I was reading it. He ...

Twilight by Stephenie Meyer is one of the best books I've read in a long time. I haven't gotten so excited or obsessed with a book since reading Harry Potter. ...

The Alex Rider series is amazing for both boys and girls. I recommend them all the time to people looking for books. If you want a fun, fast, action-packed read ...

Failed Flirtation By: Clover Madison Madeline came to the party most unusually attired. In fact the normally conservative girl was dressed, dare it be said, like a whore. Her low ...

I have this story posted on another site and there its not really that long but now that you mention it it would be better in this forum style to ...